my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]! It’s inspiring how
committing fully helped you achieve your goals. The fact that you took control
of your willpower shows maturity and determination. This attitude will surely
help you overcome future challenges as well.
-T. Sonny
The important change in my life is to make a commitment to do something.
>> An important change in my life was making a commitment to do something.
I think I have enough ability to do it, but I lacked the will to achieve it, but I was able to do many things while pledging that will.
>> I felt capable, but I often lacked the will to achieve my goals. By pledging to follow through, I was able to accomplish many things.
So was going to college, and so was trying something.
>> Going to college and trying new challenges are some of them.
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