my homework

2026-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Sonny

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: Tell me about a personal achievement you are proud of. To be honest, I have not achieved anything. I have lived a normal life, and I cannot think of any special achievements or achievements in my life. However, I think it is not because I had a bad life, but because one life and action was special, and it was a satisfactory life for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [Name]! I really like your perspective. It shows maturity and self-acceptance. Living a satisfying, meaningful life is an achievement in itself. Appreciating the ordinary moments can be more valuable than chasing extraordinary accomplishments.

-T. Sonny
To be honest, I have not achieved anything.

>>Correct!

OR. To be honest, I haven’t achieved anything extraordinary.

I have lived a normal life, and I cannot think of any special achievements or achievements in my life.

>> I have lived a normal life, and I can’t think of any remarkable accomplishments.

However, I think it is not because I had a bad life, but because one life and action was special, and it was a satisfactory life for me.

>> However, I don’t see this as a bad thing because every day, life can be special, and I am satisfied with how I’ve lived.

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