my homework

2026-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Sonny

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: What do you do when you are angry? What you do when you\'re angry is extremely limited. Honestly, I don\'t think you should act when you\'re angry. This is because actions that contain anger contain certain malice, so accidents are likely to occur. When I\'m angry, the best way is to do nothing. If you\'re angry at something, throw it away, and if you\'re angry at someone, leave the place. Next, think deeply. And think about why you\'re angry. When I think about what kind of behavior or characteristics I\'m angry at, I calm down a little. I tend to talk after that.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [Name]! Your approach to managing anger is very wise and thoughtful. It shows a lot of self-control and emotional intelligence. Taking time to reflect before acting not only prevents mistakes but also helps maintain healthy relationships.

-T. Sonny
What you do when you\'re angry is extremely limited.

>> Correct!
Honestly, I don\'t think you should act when you\'re angry.

>> Correct!

This is because actions that contain anger contain certain malice, so accidents are likely to occur.

>>This is because actions driven by anger often contain malice and can lead to accidents.
When I\'m angry, the best way is to do nothing.

>>Correct!

 If you\'re angry at something, throw it away, and if you\'re angry at someone, leave the place.

>>If I’m angry at something, I remove it, and if I’m angry at someone, I leave the place.

Next, think deeply.

>>Then I think deeply.

And think about why you\'re angry.

>>I think deeply about why I’m angry.

When I think about what kind of behavior or characteristics I\'m angry at, I calm down a little.

>>Once I identify the cause, I calm down.

I tend to talk after that.

>>Then, I can talk more reasonably.

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