my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]! It sounds like your mom is the heart of the home. She must do so much to keep everything running smoothly. It’s lovely that you notice and appreciate the time she spends there.
-T. Sonny
The person who spends the most time at home is my mom.
>> The person I spend the most
time with at home is my mom.
My dad and sister spend less time at home than my mom.
>> My dad and sister spend less time at home.
Dad is not at home every 3 days because of the night shift.
>> My dad works night shifts every three days.
And my sister is far from work, so she can only come home on weekends.
>>Correct!
Therefore, it is my mom who spends the most time at home.
>> Therefore, it is my mom whom I spend the most time with at home.
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