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2026-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Sonny

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Where you get courage seems to get the most courage when you are involved with your family. When I am involved with my precious person, I seem to receive a lot of hope, strength, will, and courage. It seems to be a characteristic of a person with a family.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [Name]! That’s beautifully expressed. Family really can be a source of strength and motivation. It’s wonderful that you feel such support and courage from being close to your loved ones.

-T. Sonny
Where you get courage seems to get the most courage when you are involved with your family.

>> I feel the most courage when I’m involved with my family.

When I am involved with my precious person, I seem to receive a lot of hope, strength, will, and courage.

>> When I am with the people I cherish, I seem to receive a lot of hope, strength, will, and courage.

It seems to be a characteristic of a person with a family.

>> I think this is a special characteristic of having a close family.

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