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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: Some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is some agreement. However, the quality of education will be lowered if it is opened entirely for free. Currently, some costs are free up to high school in Korea. However, if universities are opened for free, it will have the effect of lowering the quality of education. It is free, but it also makes graduation difficult, which raises the level of college. After that, I think it will be solved if you earn both money and the university\'s reputation by giving a diploma to someone who showed outstanding grades or donated a lot of money.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
There is some agreement.
>>> There is some agreement on this issue.
However, the quality of education will be lowered if it is opened entirely for free.
>>> However, making higher education completely free may lead to a decline in the overall quality of education.
Currently, some costs are free up to high school in Korea.
>>> In Korea, education is currently free up to high school, but university education still requires tuition.
However, if universities are opened for free, it will have the effect of lowering the quality of education.
>>>If universities were made entirely free, it could increase enrollment significantly, which might strain resources and potentially lower academic standards.
It is free, but it also makes graduation difficult, which raises the level of college.
>>> It is free, but graduation would become more difficult, which could raise the overall level of college.
After that, I think it will be solved if you earn both money and the university\'s reputation by giving a diploma to someone who showed outstanding grades or donated a lot of money.
>>>After that, I think it could be balanced by allowing universities to earn both funding and reputation by awarding diplomas to students with outstanding grades or significant financial support.
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