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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
ESSAY: Some people believe that students should study only subjects that are useful for their future careers, while others think that students should study a wide range of subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people have different opinions on studying only useful subjects and studying not useful subjects.
Those who insist on studying only useful subjects argue that they lack time to learn something else because there are many subjects to learn.
The opposite person emphasizes that there is no subject that is not necessary.
To be honest, I don\'t think there is any subject that doesn\'t require learning. For example, in Korea, philosophy is often considered to be a useless subject. However, philosophy is not useless at all. All subjects began in philosophy, and philosophy is the root of other subjects. However, it is ignored because it is not helpful for technological development. I think it is wrong.
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Those who insist on studying only useful subjects argue that they lack time to learn something else because there are many subjects to learn.
The opposite person emphasizes that there is no subject that is not necessary.
To be honest, I don\'t think there is any subject that doesn\'t require learning.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Many people have different opinions on studying only useful subjects and studying not useful subjects.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> People have different opinions about whether students should study only useful subjects or also learn subjects that may not seem useful.
Those who insist on studying only useful subjects argue that they lack time to learn something else because there are many subjects to learn.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> Those who support studying only useful subjects argue that there is not enough time to learn everything, so students should focus on subjects that are directly beneficial.
The opposite person emphasizes that there is no subject that is not necessary.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>>On the other hand, others believe that no subject is truly unnecessary.
To be honest, I don\'t think there is any subject that doesn\'t require learning.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
For example, in Korea, philosophy is often considered to be a useless subject.
>>>For example, in Korea, philosophy is often regarded as an unnecessary subject.
However, philosophy is not useless at all.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
All subjects began in philosophy, and philosophy is the root of other subjects.
>>>Philosophy is far from useless. In fact, many academic disciplines originated from philosophy, making it the foundation of many other fields of study.
However, it is ignored because it is not helpful for technological development. I think it is wrong.
>>> Although it is sometimes overlooked because it does not directly contribute to technological development, I believe this view is mistaken.
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