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Space exploration is the uncharted realm of human beings, and there is a great interest in us exploring space away from Earth. Some people believe that we can live in space, and they are trying to make it happen.
However, some people explain that it is not possible. It is said that we have to live on Earth, and since our home is Earth, we have to spend a lot of power and money protecting it. However, I disagree. I think expanding our territory is definitely helpful.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Space exploration is the uncharted realm of human beings, and there is a great interest in us exploring space away from Earth.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> Space exploration is an uncharted frontier for humanity, and there is growing interest in exploring areas beyond Earth.
Some people believe that we can live in space, and they are trying to make it happen.
However, some people explain that it is not possible.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> Some people believe that humans may eventually be able to live in space, and many scientists and organizations are working to make this possibility a reality.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> However, some people argue that living in space is not realistic.
It is said that we have to live on Earth, and since our home is Earth, we have to spend a lot of power and money protecting it.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> It is argued that humans should focus on living on Earth because it is our only home, and therefore, we should dedicate significant resources and efforts to protecting it.
However, I disagree. I think expanding our territory is definitely helpful.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> However, I disagree. I believe that expanding our territory beyond Earth can be highly beneficial.
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