My homework

2012-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Razel

학생이 쓴 원문

1. My birthday's /in/ May. 2. She'll be away /until/ next week. 3. The exam is /at/ the tenth of December. 4. I always have dinner with my family /on/ Christmas Day. 5. In Spain, they give each other presents /on/ Christmas Eve. I drank "makkŏlli" with my friend at last night. "makkŏlli" is raw rice wine, Korean traditional drink. It`s a kind of sparkling alcohol drink like a champagne. It tastes good, but gives stong hang over, if I drink too much. Have a nice weekend and happy birthday to your father!

강사 첨삭

Hello there,

               Thank you so much for taking time write your homework. you did a good job. I just have few corrections. Thanks for the greeting^^ Happy birthday too to your father.Enjoy your weekend and take care!

-Teacher Razel-

1. My birthday\'s /in/ May.

>>Correct
2. She\'ll be away /until/ next week.
>>Correct
3. The exam is /at/ the tenth of December.

>>on

4. I always have dinner with my family /on/ Christmas Day.

>>Correct
5. In Spain, they give each other presents /on/ Christmas Eve.
>>Correct

I drank \"makkŏlli\" with my friend at last night.

>>Correct

\"makkŏlli\" is raw rice wine, Korean traditional drink.

>>\"Mageolli\" is a Korean traditional drink made from raw rice wine.

It`s a kind of sparkling alcohol drink like a champagne.

>>Correct

It tastes good, but gives strong hang over, if I drink too much. 

>>Correct 

Have a nice weekend and happy birthday to your father!

>>Correct

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