My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Have you ever been anxious /about/ an examination or a dental appointment?
2. Have you ever apologized /to/ something you did or said?
3. Are you afraid /of/ any insects or animals?
4. Are you afraid about/ making mistakes with your English?
5.Has your employer given you any allowance /for/ food or travel?
I want to answer Question 3.
Actually I am afraid of frogs so much.
I am "frogphobia", if there is "frogphobia."
When I am older(maybe sixty or seventy?), I want to live rural site.
But I worry about frogs problem. I`m so scared!!!!
Hace a nice day!!
강사 첨삭
I have a solution to your fear. Try to expose yourself more to frogs like maybe on pictures first then videos. Then maybe next time your fear will lesser. Frogs are not that bad. Though, they are quite loud in the evening. Anyway, here are my corrections.
T. Razel
1.Have you ever been anxious /about/ an examination or a dental appointment?>>Correct!2. Have you ever apologized /to/ something you did or said?>>d. for3. Are you afraid /of/ any insects or animals?>>Correct!4. Are you afraid about/ making mistakes with your English?>>d. of5.Has your employer given you any allowance /for/ food or travel?>>a. forI want to answer Question 3.
>>I want to talk about Question 3.Actually I am afraid of frogs so much.
>>Correct!I am \"frogphobia\", if there is \"frogphobia.\"
>>I have \"frog phobia\", if there is such an expression as \"frog phobia\". (Actually there is. Or you may also say ranidaphobia)When I am older(maybe sixty or seventy?), I want to live rural site.
>>When I am older (maybe sixty or seveny?, I want to live in the rural area.But I worry about frogs problem. I`m so scared!!!!>>But I worry about frogs. I\'m so scared!Hace a nice day!!
>>Have a nice day!
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