My homework

2012-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Good morning Aurora? This is [Name] homework. About the most important things in life. I think important all. If example health, my family, work, money and the others... If by force expression, the most important is health. Thank you. [이름]

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Good day Mr. [Name]! I\'m really happy to see your homework today. I really do hope you keep your self healthy. Maybe you can go to the doctor too to check your left foot because you told me it\'s painful. Have a fun day ahead! T. Aurora Good morning Aurora? >>Good morning Aurora.This is [Name] homework.About the most important things in life. >>This is my homework about the most important things in life.I think important all. >>I think everything is important.If example health, my family, work, money and the others... >>For example healthy, my family, work, money and others.If by force expression, the most important is health. >>If I have to choose, the most important is health.Thank you. >>Correct!See you tommow. >>Correct!

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