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2012-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Good afternoon Aurora. Do you having fun weekend? 1.Three years ago, I investmented in real estate. But I fall a victim to fraud. I lost a lot of money. I did very very much an uneasy task. 2.Ten years ago, my family and father of my wife went the United States of America. Then we staied one month. We sightseed The East and The West. I remained the best in one's memory. Thanks for your help Aurora. May you have a good day!

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Good day Mr. [Name]! ^^ I did have a pleasand weekend. I had a lot of time to rest and sleep as well. I hope you also enjoyed your weekend. Stay safe and take care. T. Aurora Good afternoon Aurora. >>Correct!Do you having fun weekend?>>Did you have a fun weekend?1.Three years ago, I investmented in real estate. >>Three years ago, I invested on a real estate.But I fall a victim to fraud. >>But I fell victin to fraud.  I lost a lot of money.>>Correct! I did very very much an uneasy task.>>It was a very uneasy tak2.Ten years ago, my family and father of my wife went the United States of America. >>Ten years ago, my family, and my wife\'s father went to the United States of America.Then we staied one month. >>We stayed there for one month.  We sightseed The East and The West.>>We went sight seeing on the East and the West. I remained the best in one\'s memory.>>It remains as the best memory I\'ve ever had.Thanks for your help Aurora. >>Correct!May you have a good day! >>Correct!

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