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2012-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Good evening Aurora. It is so much raining because It is SANBA. 8.30 a.didn't see b.didn't come, feel a.was b.examined, told, had, prescribed, told a.Did, stay b.had a.drived, crashed, didn't see a.Who, get b.did a.listening, remembered, asked. 8.31 A thing of beautiful is a joy for ever. -John keats- I think naturalbeautiful is best of it. And It important appearance but the inside important than it. It important have regular features but important a figure, a pose of all things and speech and behavior. 9.3 1.made up 2.look up 3.Run out 4.stands out 5.broken down 9.4 1.by 2.with 3.at 4.by 5.by 6.by 7.by 8.with 9.with 10.at 9.5 -Tom is eligible of a class president. -It was blizzard last winter. -A plan have to a feasible plan. 9.17 1.him(b) 2.him(a) 3.her(a)

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A nice evening to you! Thank you for managing your assignment. Sometimes, it also rains in our place but not too hard. I was reading your composition about beauty and I do agree with you that we shall not always consider the physical appearance but most importantly, what is inside. See you in our class and have a good night sleep.^^ -T.Aurora Good evening Aurora. >>CORRECT!It is so much raining because It is SANBA.>>It is raining hard because it is Sanba.8.30a.didn\'t see b.didn\'t come, feel >>A: Hi, Mary. I (didn\'t see)  you at school last Monday.B: Hello, Bob. I (didn\'t come)  on Monday. I wasn\'t (feeling)  well, so I (decided)  to go to the doctor.a.was b.examined, told, had, prescribed, told >>CORRECT!a.Did, stay b.had >>CORRECT!a.drived, crashed, didn\'t see >>B: When a friend (drove/was driving)  me home, he (crashed)  his car. He (didn\'t see)  the red lighta.Who, get b.did >>A: (Did) anyone (get)  hurt?B: Thank God, nobody (did) . a.listening, remembered, asked.>>A: I\'m happy to hear that. Well, Mary, I have to rush now. While I (was listening) to your story, I (remembered)  that my wife (asked)  me to go to the mechanic to get our car. See you later. Take care.8.31A thing of beautiful is a joy for ever. -John keats- >>A thing of beauty is a joy forever.I think natural beautiful is best of it. >>I think natural beauty is the best of it.And It important appearance but the inside important than it. >>And appearance is important but what is inside is more important.It important have regular features but important a figure, a pose of all things and speech and behavior.>>It is important to have regular features but of all things, a figure a pose, speech and behavior is also  important. 9.171.him(b) >>CORRECT!2.him(a) >>CORRECT!3.her(a) >>CORRECT!

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