My homework

2012-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Good afternoon! Aurora I am sorry. Today is very much homework. 9.20 1. The children play football in the garden. 2. We went to the cinema yesterday. 3. John almost fell off the bike. 4. Her boyfriend will buy her some flowers probably. 5. My uncle is moving to stockholm soon. 9.21 1. Almost 2. Almost all 3. most of 4. almost 5. almost 9.24 1. My father allowed a dawing in 1974. Then I am second-year a high school. 2. I didn't expect on pass an test. 3. Tim's glasses make in safety glass. 4. I want speak in English very well. 5. I don't know. What do you mean by 'pursuaded'? 9.25 1. My lawyer advised to take care of my health. 2. I was warmed a temperate studying to late. 3. Remind for know oneself. 4. Having a car enables to you. 5. Don't stop studying English hard. Thank you very much! May you have a good day! See you tomorrow~

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You\'ve finally caught up on your homework ^^. Thanks for trying to finish all of your unfinished homework. Have a great time this day Mr. [Name]. Talk to you soon! T. Aurora Good afternoon! Aurora >>Good afternoon Aurora.I am sorry. >>Correct!  Today is very much homework.>>I will be submitting a lot of homeworks today.9.201. The children play football in the garden. >>Correct!2. We went to the cinema yesterday. >>Correct!3. John almost fell off the bike. >>Correct!4. Her boyfriend will buy her some flowers probably. >>Her boyfriend will probably buy her some flowers.  5. My uncle is moving to stockholm soon.>>My uncle is definitely moving to Stockholm soon 9.211. Almost >>Almost all2. Almost all >>Almost all3. most of >>Correct! 4. almost >>Correct!5. almost >>Correct!9.241. My father allowed a dawing in 1974. Then I am second-year a high school. >>My father allowed a drawing to be bought in 1974. I was in second year high school then.2. I didn\'t expect on pass an test. >>I didn\'t expect to pass the tests.3. Tim\'s glasses make in safety glass. >>Tims glasses protects his eyes.4. I want speak in English very well. >>I want to speak English very well.5. I don\'t know. What do you mean by \'pursuaded\'?>>Sarah pursuaded John to eat vegetables.  (I\'m sorry for the typographical error. It\'s supposed to be \"persuaded\" meaning to convince.)   9.251. My lawyer advised to take care of my health. >>My lawyer advised me to take care of my health.2. I was warmed a temperate studying to late. >>I was warned not to study late.3. Remind for know oneself. >>Remind yourself about this. >>Remind your mom about our appointment.4. Having a car enables to you. >>Having a car enable you to travel anywhere.5. Don\'t stop studying English hard. >>Correct! Thank you very much! >>Correct!May you have a good day! >>Correct!See you tomorrow~ >>Correct!

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