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2020-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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My favorite activity is \'going to library\'. Because I like reading books. Reading books are so fun! I like \'Harry Potter\' book. I am reading \'Harry potter and the Order of the Phoenix\'. It was scary and fun! I like Harry Potter!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

Thank you for sending your homework. See you in our next class! 



Cheers!
Jean


My favorite activity is \'going to library\'. Because I like reading books.
>> My favorite activity is going to the library because I enjoy reading books. 

Reading books are so fun!
>> Reading books is so much fun!

I like \'Harry Potter\' book.
>> I like Harry Potter books.

I am reading \'Harry potter and the Order of the Phoenix\'.
>> I am reading Harry potter and the Order of the Phoenix.
>> Note: You don\'t need a quotation around a book title. 

It was scary and fun!
>> It\'s scary but fun!

I like Harry Potter!
>> CORRECT

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