My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I had been staying china for 4years.
First time, I thought it would be ok and I could stand everything in China. But after for a while, I realized chinese culture is totally different with korean culture. Most chinese people are not kind and mean.(I mean not all chinese people,some chinese people)
I really wanted to make chinese friends in class. I was so sad when break time and gym class because I didn't have friends.
but,they ignored me. But I didn't forgive and write letters for my classmate almost everynight. Therefore, I had some chinese friends. Even though I don't have many chinese friends, I am still happy to be with them. Now, they respect me and like me.
Moreover, I had hard time to learn Chinese language.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! Like everybody when they go and live to other places they have to adjust.
I think you did great when you were China that's why you gain some friends. Anyway,
it doesn't matter if you have a lot of friends what's important is you have true friends.
Take care! See you tomorrow!
Love,
Verna
I had been staying china for 4years.
>> I stayed in China for four years. First time, I thought it would be ok and I could stand everything in China.
>>At first, I thought it would be ok and I can stand everythingi n China.
But after for a while, I realized chinese culture is totally different with korean culture.
>>But after a while, I realized Chinese culture is totally different from Korean culture.
Most chinese people are not kind and mean.(I mean not all chinese people,some chinese people)
>> Correct^^I really wanted to make chinese friends in class.
>> I really wanted to make friends with Chinese in the class.
I was so sad when break time and gym class because I didn't have friends.
>> Correct^^but,they ignored me. But I didn't forgive and write letters for my classmate almost everynight.
>> They ignored me so I didn't forgive them. I wrote letters for my classmates everynight.
Therefore, I had some chinese friends.
>> Correct^^
Even though I don't have many chinese friends, I am still happy to be with them.
>> Correct^^
Now, they respect me and like me.
>> Now they respect and like me.Moreover, I had hard time to learn Chinese language.
>> Moreover, I had a hard time learning Chinese language.
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