My homework

2010-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

I had been staying china for 4years. First time, I thought it would be ok and I could stand everything in China. But after for a while, I realized chinese culture is totally different with korean culture. Most chinese people are not kind and mean.(I mean not all chinese people,some chinese people) I really wanted to make chinese friends in class. I was so sad when break time and gym class because I didn't have friends. but,they ignored me. But I didn't forgive and write letters for my classmate almost everynight. Therefore, I had some chinese friends. Even though I don't have many chinese friends, I am still happy to be with them. Now, they respect me and like me. Moreover, I had hard time to learn Chinese language.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!  Like everybody when they go and live to other places they have to adjust. I think you did great when you were China that's why you gain some friends. Anyway, it doesn't matter if you have a lot of friends what's important is you have true friends. Take care! See you tomorrow! Love, Verna   I had been staying china for 4years. >> I stayed in China for four years. First time, I thought it would be ok and I could stand everything in China. >>At first, I thought it would be ok and I can stand everythingi n China. But after for a while, I realized chinese culture is totally different with korean culture. >>But after a while, I realized Chinese culture is totally different from Korean culture. Most chinese people are not kind and mean.(I mean not all chinese people,some chinese people) >> Correct^^I really wanted to make chinese friends in class. >> I really wanted to make friends with Chinese in the class. I was so sad when break time and gym class because I didn't have friends. >> Correct^^but,they ignored me. But I didn't forgive and write letters for my classmate almost everynight. >> They ignored me so I didn't forgive them. I wrote letters for my classmates everynight. Therefore, I had some chinese friends. >> Correct^^  Even though I don't have many chinese friends, I am still happy to be with them. >> Correct^^  Now, they respect me and like me. >> Now they respect and like me.Moreover, I had hard time to learn Chinese language. >> Moreover, I had a hard time learning Chinese language.

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