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What are some reason why privacy is important for you? Explain why?" I think privacy is one of most important factors to be protected in our daily lives for various reason. Privacy is a basic right in our lives but on various occasion, it remains very vulnerable in modern times. We enjoy a wide range of advantage of abundant information throughout internet. Thanks to this, we can easily get an access to any datas or info. However, This also can play a doble-edged sword. There are victims who suffer from privacy violation in virtual reality. There are many hackers or people who make a baseless rumors. They abuse the anonymosity of vituality and make harm other people. I think every person reserves right to protect themselves and nobody can invade it without its permission. The title is a little difficult. I think I need to do more brainstorming for this topic. Although the importance of privay is so important and frequently mentioned in our life, I've never pondered it with many

Hi Martha. Here are my corrections. I noticed that most of your mistakes are on some choice of words and some other minor mistakes like on singular and plurals. Great job nonetheless. See you tomorrow! T. Aurora What are some reason why privacy is important for you? Explain why?\"I think privacy is one of most important factors to be protected in our daily lives for various reason. >>I think privacy is one of most important factors to be protected in our daily lives for various reasons.  Privacy is a basic right in our lives but on various occasion, it remains very vulnerable in modern times. >>Privacy is a basic right in our lives but on various occasion, it remains very vulnerable in modern times.  We enjoy a wide range of advantage of abundant information throughout internet. >> We enjoy a wide range of advantage of abundant information throughout the internet. Thanks to this, we can easily get an access to any datas or info. >>Thanks to this, we can easily get an access to any data or info. (Singular form of data is datum. The plural is data) However, This also can play a doble-edged sword. >>However, this also can play a double-edged sword. There are victims who suffer from privacy violation in virtual reality. >>Correct! There are many hackers or people who make a baseless rumors. >>There are many hackers or people who make baseless rumors. They abuse the anonymosity of vituality and make harm other people. >>They abuse the anonymosity of vituality and do harm to other people.  I think every person reserves right to protect themselves and nobody can invade it without its permission. >> I think every person reserves the right to protect themselves and nobody can invade it without their permission.The title is a little difficult. >>Correct!  I think I need to do more brainstorming for this topic. >>Correct! Although the importance of privay is so important and frequently mentioned in our life, I\'ve never pondered it with many >>Although the importance of privacy is so important and frequently mentioned in our life, I\'ve never pondered on it.