My homework

Do you agree that swimming in the ocean is better than swimming in a public pool?Explain your answer. I prefer swimming in the ocean to in a public pool. There are some reasons for that. First, It is healthier for our body. Well, the water in the ocean contains various minerals and even has therapuric power over some skin desease. Otherwise, the water in a public pool is processed with some chemical substances to purify it from the contamination. Because itself doesn't have purifying fuction and get easily go dirty because of the crowds. If we go there, we dip our body in that water and some times we gulped it.Second, It is eco-friendly. We can feel with our own body the texture of sand, rock, shell and even beaufiful sunset in the shorline. It is like a getting away from it all to relax and recharge ourselves. However,in the pool we hardly can enjoy those feelings. For these two reason, I prefer to swim in the ocean than in a public pool.

Hi Martha! I wasn\'t able to talk to you today. I hope all is well. I know you couldn\'t go to the beach this time of the year since it\'s too cold. Thanks for sharing your opinion about this topic. ^^ See you tomorrow! T. Aurora Do you agree that swimming in the ocean is better than swimming in a public pool?Explain your answer. I prefer swimming in the ocean to in a public pool. >>I prefer swimming in the ocean to a public pool. There are some reasons for that. >>Correct!  First, It is healthier for our body. >>First, it is healthier for our body. (Don\'t capitalize the first letter of the word after a comma.) Well, the water in the ocean contains various minerals and even has therapuric power over some skin desease. >>Well, the water in the ocean contains various minerals and even has therapeutic power over some skin diseases.  Otherwise, the water in a public pool is processed with some chemical substances to purify it from the contamination. >>However, the water in a public pool is processed with some chemical substances to purify it from contamination.  Because itself doesn\'t have purifying fuction and get easily go dirty because of the crowds. >>Because the water itself doesn\'t have any purifying function and gets easily dirty because of the crowd.  If we go there, we dip our body in that water and some times we gulped it. >>Correct! Second, It is eco-friendly. >>Second, it is eco-friendly.  We can feel with our own body the texture of sand, rock, shell and even beaufiful sunset in the shorline. >> We can feel with our own body the texture of sand, rock, shell and even watch the beaufiful sunset at the horizon.  It is like a getting away from it all to relax and recharge ourselves. >>It is like getting away from everything to relax and recharge ourselves.However,in the pool we hardly can enjoy those feelings. >>However, in a pool, we hardly can enjoy those feelings.For these two reason, I prefer to swim in the ocean than in a public pool. >>For these two reasons, I prefer to swim in the ocean than in a public pool.