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2013-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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What is the best way to show your love to the people important to you? I haven't much thoght about it. It sounds very difficult to come up with best idea to show my sincerity to my loved ones. But, I think I can show my love by simple an easy things. For example, I can send them a hand writting letter on a regular basis. We have plenty ways to get in touch with our people such as thogh the phone call, e-mail, SNS,ect,but I think letter wiill be the most moving and kind gesture I can show them. Also, I can make some foods or cookies which can represent my effort and care about them.Showing our minds sincerely doesn't cost nor difficult. We can look aroung our surroundings and figure it out what would make my people happy. We can start with very tiny and humble things. I think these kind of gestures are more valuable than buying a fancy present or other materiales. Because we are always tend to forget the most important basic and essencial things. If we do these things which might

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Doing the simplest things are often the best. ^^ I hope you get to do what you plan to do for today for the special people in your life. Take it easy Martha! Happy Valentines day! T. Aurora What is the best way to show your love to the people important to you?I haven\'t much thoght about it. >>I haven\'t thought much about it.  It sounds very difficult to come up with best idea to show my sincerity to my loved ones. >> It sounds very difficult to come up with the best idea to show my sincerity to my loved ones. But, I think I can show my love by simple an easy things. >>But, I think I can show my love by simple and easy things.  For example, I can send them a hand writting letter on a regular basis. >> For example, I can send them a hand written letter on a regular basis.  We have plenty ways to get in touch with our people such as thogh the phone call, e-mail, SNS,ect,but I think letter wiill be the most moving and kind gesture I can show them. >> We have plenty of ways to get in touch with other people such as through a phone call, e-mail, SNS,etc,but I think letters will be the most moving and kind gesture I can show them.  Also, I can make some foods or cookies which can represent my effort and care about them. >>Correct! Showing our minds sincerely doesn\'t cost nor difficult. >>Showing our minds sincerely doesn\'t cost nor is it difficult. We can look aroung our surroundings and figure it out what would make my people happy. >>We can look around our surroundings and figure out what would make my people happy.  We can start with very tiny and humble things. >>Correct!I think these kind of gestures are more valuable than buying a fancy present or other materiales. >>Correct **materiales should be materials Because we are always tend to forget the most important basic and essencial things. >>Because we always tend to forget the most important, basic and essential things. If we do these things which might >>If we do these things, it will make them happy. (I think the space was not enough ^^)

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