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Are females better students than males
I agree that in general, female are better students than males. The former tends to be deligent and enthusiastic which make them yield better score in school life. However, I think it can make hasty generalization. Becuase each sex has different abilities so we can't judge that a particular sex is superior to the other. For example, in mathmatics, science boys are normally goot at these subjetct, on the other hand, girls are at history, language. In this situation, how can we decide the prioritization of all subjects and determie that females are better students? Seeing than males also have some good abilities.
This brings so many things to consider. The inclinatin of each sex, different construction of brain, their caracteristics. However, sometimes I think than those stereotypes things are suceeded from very long ago that we just accept them as ours real apperance. Maybe anyone knows the answer of this question.
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Good day Martha! I\'m glad you did your homework today. A good way to give your answers is to keep it simple and understandable. To tell you honestly, you jumped from one idea to the other on your answer to the homework. Keep a logical arrangement to your answer to provide clarity and understanding. It doesn\'t matter whether you\'ll use simple words, the most important thing is that you\'d get your idea accross.
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Are females better students than malesI agree that in general, female are better students than males.
>>I agree that in general, females are better students than males.
The former tends to be deligent and enthusiastic which make them yield better score in school life.
>>Correct! (though the spelling of \'deligent\' should be \'diligent\'.)
However, I think it can make hasty generalization.
>>However, I think I don\'t want to make a hasty generalization.
Becuase each sex has different abilities so we can\'t judge that a particular sex is superior to the other.
>>Correct! (spelling of \'becuase\' should be \'because\')
For example, in mathmatics, science boys are normally goot at these subjetct, on the other hand, girls are at history, language.
>>For example, in mathematics and science, boys are normally good at these subjects. On the other hand, girls are good at history and language.
In this situation, how can we decide the prioritization of all subjects and determie that females are better students?
>>Correct! (though the spelling of \'determie\' should be \'determine\')
Seeing than males also have some good abilities.
>>Seeing that males also have some good abilities.This brings so many things to consider.
>>Correct!
The inclinatin of each sex, different construction of brain, their caracteristics.
>>Each sex has different inclination, contruction of brain and characteristics.
However, sometimes I think than those stereotypes things are suceeded from very long ago that we just accept them as ours real apperance.
>>However, sometimes I think that the stereotypical quality of people is something we have long accepted and practiced.
Maybe anyone knows the answer of this question.
>>Maybe anyone knows the answer to this question.
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