my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I am a lawmaker, I will choose number 1.
Because I sometimes saw many drunken people who do bad things
such as urinating on the street, shouting and provoking others
in the public areas.
When I saw their detestable actions, I felt unpleasant.
강사 첨삭
Hi Alice!
It's nice to know your opinion regarding liquor restrictions!
We have the same choice ^_^
Anyway, here are my corrections:
If I am a lawmaker, I will choose number 1.
>>> correct
Because I sometimes saw many drunken people who do bad things
>>> because sometimes I see many drunken people who do bad things
such as urinating on the street, shouting and provoking othersin the public areas.
>>>such as urinating on the street, shouting and provoking othersin public areas.
When I saw their detestable actions, I felt unpleasant.
>>> When I see their detestable actions, I feel unpleasant.
or you can also say, When I see their fithy actions, I feel bad or irritated.
T. Jana
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