my homework

2010-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jana

학생이 쓴 원문

If I am a lawmaker, I will choose number 1. Because I sometimes saw many drunken people who do bad things such as urinating on the street, shouting and provoking others in the public areas. When I saw their detestable actions, I felt unpleasant.

강사 첨삭

Hi Alice!  It's nice to know your opinion regarding liquor restrictions!   We have the same choice ^_^   Anyway, here are my corrections:   If I am a lawmaker, I will choose number 1. >>> correct Because I sometimes saw many drunken people who do bad things >>> because sometimes I see many drunken people who do bad things such as urinating on the street, shouting and provoking othersin the public areas. >>>such as urinating on the street, shouting and provoking othersin public areas. When I saw their detestable actions, I felt unpleasant. >>> When I see their detestable actions, I feel unpleasant. or you can also say,  When I see their fithy actions, I feel bad or irritated.   T. Jana

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