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How do commercials affect the purchasing tendencies of viewers?
I think commercials have great effect on the purchasing tendencies of viewers.
There are a wide range of products on market, so sometimes we are easily get frustrated when we have to buy something. However,commercials and ads help us choose the product among them. I think commercials give us information about the item but also make us familiar with it. It's like a guide. Because of this fact, we can remember or familar with the product and buy them. Secondly,a well-organized commercial can get a peoples interest and preference over their product. They can make commercial with the logo song or with celebrity, animation ect. I think this will be directly related to the firts purchase.
For these reasons, I think commercial have huge effect on our purchase tendency.
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Hi there!!!
Your opinion about the topic is amazing. I think you are right, commercials really influence our purchasing tendencies. Keep up the great job!
Have a great evening ahead.
Teacher Aurora ^_^
How do commercials affect the purchasing tendencies of viewers?I think commercials have great effect on the purchasing tendencies of viewers.
>>I think commercials have a great effect on the purchasing tendencies of viewers. There are a wide range of products on market, so sometimes we are easily get frustrated when we have to buy something.
>>There are a wide range of products at the market, so sometimes we easily get frustrated when we have to buy something.
However,commercials and ads help us choose the product among them.
>>CORRECT!
>>>OR: However, commercials and ads help us choose the right products.
I think commercials give us information about the item but also make us familiar with it.
>>I think commercials give us information about the item and also makes us familiar with it.
It\'s like a guide.
>>CORRECT!
Because of this fact, we can remember or familar with the product and buy them.>>Because of this fact, we can remember or be familiarized with the product and buy them.
Secondly,a well-organized commercial can get a peoples interest and preference over their product.
>>Secondly, a well-organized commercial can get peoples interest and preference over their product.
They can make commercial with the logo song or with celebrity, animation ect.
>>They can make a commercial with logos, songs,celebrities, animations and etc.
I think this will be directly related to the firts purchase.>>CORRECT!For these reasons, I think commercial have huge effect on our purchase tendency.
>> For these reasons, I think commercials have a huge effect on our purchasing tendency.
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