My homework
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What are your opinions on robots taking the place of teachers?
I totally disagree with this statement. Because I think robot dosen't have qualifications which are essential to be a good teacher.
Being teacher dosen't only mean that teaching subjects but supporting students by communicating and encouraging them. However, if robots substitute the teachers, they can't manage to handle these situation. Because they don't have emotion and comprehesion. Also, there will be no sense of belonings between teacher and students. I think feelinf connected and related each other is one of the most important things we should learn in society. School also is a kind of society where these value can be taught to them. All things considered, I deagree that robot takes place the teacher.
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You have expressed yourself well in spite of some missed out articles on some of your sentences.
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T. Aurora
What are your opinions on robots taking the place of teachers?I totally disagree with this statement.
>>Correct!
Because I think robot dosen\'t have qualifications which are essential to be a good teacher.
>>Because I think robots don\'t have qualifications which are essential to be a good teacher. Being teacher dosen\'t only mean that teaching subjects but supporting students by communicating and encouraging them.
>>Being a teacher doesn\'t only mean teaching subjects but supporting students by communicating and encouraging them.
However, if robots substitute the teachers, they can\'t manage to handle these situation.
>>Correct!
Because they don\'t have emotion and comprehesion.
>>Because they don\'t have emotions and comprehesion.
Also, there will be no sense of belonings between teacher and students.
>>Also, there will be no sense of belongingnes between the teacher and the students.
I think feelinf connected and related each other is one of the most important things we should learn in society.
>> I think feeling connected and related to each other is one of the most important things we should learn in the society.
School also is a kind of society where these value can be taught to them.
>>Correct!
All things considered, I deagree that robot takes place the teacher.
>>All things considered, I disagree that robots will take the place of teachers.
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