My homework
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1-D) To inform supervisors of a change in policy.
2-D) On January 1st.
3. Answer the following inquiry: Hi good morning. I'm Katie Holmes and a new employee at this company. I would like to inquire if I'm entitled to any benefits while I'm on probation and when I will finish my probationary period. Thank you and I hope to hear from your soon.
Hello,Ms.Holmes. This is [이름],[이름] from Human Resource Department. I'm returning your call regarding the new employee beneficts. I'm not sure if yor supervisor has already nofity you of our new policy. Well, effective January 1st, all new employees have to complete the probation period for three months. Once they have finished this period, they will be entitle to all benefits the company offer. I hope this informtation would be helpful for you. If you have furtur question about this matter, please feel free to contact me at Ext. 321. Buy.
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Hi Martha! You finally found time to do your homework today! ^^ That\'s great!
You\'re a very studious person.I think you could easily achieve your goals seeing how determined you are.
I\'ve written down some more tips for your answers. Let me know tomorrow if you have any questions.
T. Aurora
1-D) To inform supervisors of a change in policy.>>Correct!2-D) On January 1st.>>Correct!3. Answer the following inquiry: Hi good morning. I\'m Katie Holmes and a new employee at this company. I would like to inquire if I\'m entitled to any benefits while I\'m on probation and when I will finish my probationary period. Thank you and I hope to hear from your soon.Hello,Ms.Holmes.
>>Correct!
This is [이름],[이름] from Human Resource Department.
>>This is [이름] from the Human Resource Department. (He usually put a comma when we write down the last name first before the first name. For example: Holmes, Katie ; [이름], [이름]. If we\'ll start with the first name, then there\'s no need to put a comma before the last name.)
I\'m returning your call regarding the new employee beneficts.
>>I\'m returning your call regarding the new employee\'s benefits.
I\'m not sure if yor supervisor has already nofity you of our new policy.
>>I\'m not sure if yor supervisor has already notified you of our new policy.
Well, effective January 1st, all new employees have to complete the probation period for three months.
>>Correct!
Once they have finished this period, they will be entitle to all benefits the company offer.
>>Once they have finished this period, they will be entitled to all benefits the company will offer.
I hope this informtation would be helpful for you.
>>Correct!
If you have furtur question about this matter, please feel free to contact me at Ext. 321. Buy.
>>If you have further questions about this matter, please feel free to contact me at Ext. 321. Thank you and have a great day.
(We don\'t usually use the word \'bye\' or \'goodbye\' on formal or business letters or transactions since they are very informal expression.)
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