My homework
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This is a picture of people strolling around the park. I can see three people in the middle of this picture. The main focus of this picture is an eldery woman sitting in a wheel chair. She is dreesed up well wearing pearl earigns and necklace. Behind her, there is a man who is pushing her wheel chair. From what he is wearing, he seems to be her assitant from silver center. Next to them, there is an elderly man wearing a blue light shirt and white pants. He is holding a woman's hand. It seems like they run into in the park while strolling and greeting to each other.They are facing to each other and I think they are having a conversation. In the back ground the picture I can see some leaves scatttered on the ground and some leaves have changed their color. So I guess it is autumm season. Also the weather seems very good and it's nice to take a walk outside.
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Here\'s my correction to your homework yesterday. There just errors on prepositions and missed out articles.
Kindly look into them and if you have a question, feel free to ask tomorrow. Ciao!
T. Aurora
This is a picture of people strolling around the park.
>>Correct!
I can see three people in the middle of this picture.
>>Correct!
The main focus of this picture is an eldery woman sitting in a wheel chair.
>>The main focus of this picture is an eldery woman sitting on a wheel chair.
She is dreesed up well wearing pearl earigns and necklace.
>>She is dressed up well, wearing peark earings and a necklace.
Behind her, there is a man who is pushing her wheel chair.
>>Correct!
From what he is wearing, he seems to be her assitant from silver center.
>>From what he is wearing, he seems to be her assistant from a silver center.
Next to them, there is an elderly man wearing a blue light shirt and white pants.
>>Correct!
He is holding a woman\'s hand.
>>He is holding the woman\'s hand.
It seems like they run into in the park while strolling and greeting to each other.
>>It seems like they run into each other at the park while strolling so they greeted each other.
They are facing to each other and I think they are having a conversation.
>>They are facing each other and I think they are having a conversation.
In the back ground the picture I can see some leaves scatttered on the ground and some leaves have changed their color.
>>In the background of the picture, I can see some leaves scattered on the ground and some leaves have changed their color.
So I guess it is autumm season.
>>So I guess it is the autumn season.
Also the weather seems very good and it\'s nice to take a walk outside.
>>Correct!
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