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2013-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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B/C/B/A/D/B/D/A/A/D If you were to move to a poor, primitive country, what three things would you most miss from your current life? If I were to move to a poor, primitive country, I would be missing my blog,my mobile phone and deilicious cuisine of Korea. Sometimes I watch some documentaries featuring the third world where people live in poor condition. Then, I started to think of what if I were borned there, what I would be? And all of sudden I get scared to lose all the things I have now. And I think that I have to cherish what I have now and what I take for granted. My house,my family. friends,clothes, food, ect Even though I mentioned only three things above, to be honest, I would be missing all the things I have, even you Aurora!! jeje There is only one day left for the Toeic Speaking test...I think I must be a little frustrated and depressed. And I know that these attitude will not help me to demonstrate my English! Well, I'll do my best anyway. Let's see next monday!

강사 첨삭

Awww, I\'m touched that I\'m one of the people you\'ll miss. ^^ We have all the more reason to appreciate what we have now because we\'ll never know how long we\'ll have it. I\'m wishing you all the luck for your examination. I\'m positive that you\'ll do well. You can do it! T. Aurora B/ >>Correct! C/ >>Correct! B/ >>Correct! A/ >>Correct! D/ >>Correct! B/ >>Correct! D/ >>Correct! A/ >>Correct! A/ >>Correct! D>>Correct!If you were to move to a poor, primitive country, what three things would you most miss from your current life?If I were to move to a poor, primitive country, I would be missing my blog,my mobile phone and deilicious cuisine of Korea. >>If I were to move to a poor, primitive country, I would be missing my blog,my mobile phone and the deilicious cuisine of Korea.  Sometimes I watch some documentaries featuring the third world where people live in poor condition. >>Correct! Then, I started to think of what if I were borned there, what I would be? >>Then I started to think what it would be like to be born there.  And all of sudden I get scared to lose all the things I have now. >>And all of a sudden, I got scared to lose all the things I have now.  And I think that I have to cherish what I have now and what I take for granted. My house,my family. friends,clothes, food, ect >>And I think that I have to cherish what I have now and what I take for granted like my house,my family. friends,clothes, food, etc.  Even though I mentioned only three things above, to be honest, I would be missing all the things I have, even you Aurora!! jeje>>Correct (^-^)There is only one day left for the Toeic Speaking test...I think I must be a little frustrated and depressed. >>There is only one day left before the Toeic Speaking test...I think I must be a little frustrated and depressed. And I know that these attitude will not help me to demonstrate my English! >>Correct! Well, I\'ll do my best anyway. >>Correct! Let\'s see next monday! >>See you next Monday!

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