my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi T.Alcie
My most quality is 'Kind'.
I think When I should be nice to otehrs, the other people should be nice to me.
So I always kindly should be nice to others.
My main force is 'kindness ' in my office.
And I'll be nice to you, too. ^0^
have a nice day!!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Being kind is indeed a good quality of a person.
I\'m glad you are always nice and kind to your co-workers and to me. :)
Keep that personality, okay?
Well it\'s Friday!!! Yipee!
Catch you later, [이름]! :)
~Teacher Alice
Hi T.Alcie
>> Hi Teacher Alice.>> Hi Teacher Alice!
>> Hi Teacher Alice, My most quality is \'Kind\'.>> My best quality is \"kindness\".
>> OR: My best quality is being kind. I think When I should be nice to otehrs, the other people should be nice to me.
>> I think that when I will be nice to others, other people will be nice to me in return. So I always kindly should be nice to others.
>> So I\'m always kind and nice to others. My main force is \'kindness \' in my office.
>> My main in my office is \"kindness\".And I\'ll be nice to you, too. ^0^
>> Correct!have a nice day!!
>> Have a nice day!!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.