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2013-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi T.Alcie My most quality is 'Kind'. I think When I should be nice to otehrs, the other people should be nice to me. So I always kindly should be nice to others. My main force is 'kindness ' in my office. And I'll be nice to you, too. ^0^ have a nice day!!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Being kind is indeed a good quality of a person. I\'m glad you are always nice and kind to your co-workers and to me. :) Keep that personality, okay? Well it\'s Friday!!! Yipee! Catch you later, [이름]! :) ~Teacher Alice Hi T.Alcie >> Hi Teacher Alice.>> Hi Teacher Alice! >> Hi Teacher Alice, My most quality is \'Kind\'.>> My best quality is \"kindness\". >> OR: My best quality is being kind. I think When I should be nice to otehrs, the other people should be nice to me. >> I think that when I will be nice to others, other people will be nice to me in return. So I always kindly should be nice to others. >> So I\'m always kind and nice to others. My main force is \'kindness \' in my office. >> My main in my office is \"kindness\".And I\'ll be nice to you, too. ^0^ >> Correct!have a nice day!! >> Have a nice day!! 

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