My homework.

Hello my teacher. ^^ I have some book to read but I can't read them because I am busy. I will read them tonight. Here is my homework. I wanted to speak English. So, I read some English book but my speaking didn't improve. One day, I went to overseas for sightseeing. I was afraid of speaking but I did. Some woman foreigner listened to my story and she answered me. I felt funny and was happy. So, in my opinion, learning from experience is better than learning from a book.

Hi my [이름]! ^^ Thank you for making your homework. Well,   we can actually learn from reading books. But, I think it is better to learn through experiences. As they say, experience is the  best teacher. I agree with you.  By the way, please study your corrections below, okay. Please don\'t get tire of it. Thank you, [이름]! ^^ Have a great day ahead, [이름]! ^^ Take care always! ^^ ~~Teacher Kris I have some book to read but I can\'t read them because I am busy. >> I have some books to read but I can\'tread all of it because I am busy.I will read them tonight. >> I will read it tonight.I wanted to speak English. >> I wanted to speak in English.So, I read some English book but my speaking didn\'t improve. >> So, I read some English books but my speaking is not improving.One day, I went to overseas for sightseeing. >> CorrectI was afraid of speaking but I did. >> I was afraid of speaking but I did it.Some woman foreigner listened to my story and she answered me. >> A woman foreigner listened to my story and she responded.I felt funny and was happy. >> I was funny and happy.So, in my opinion, learning from experience is better than learning from a book. >> So, in my opinion. learning from an experience is better than learning from a book.