My homework.

2015-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Q1 - We met while the Xmas holidays. Q2 - I learned French during I was working in a wine bar in Paris. Q3 - It happened during was out. Q4 - It happened while my lunch break. Q5 - It happened while the flooding. Q6 - It happened while the floods. Q7 - I fell asleep while the film. Q8 - I fell asleep while I was watching the film Q9 - We had a lot of trouble while the journey. Q10 - While working there, I met some really nice people.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you today? Thank you for making your homework. I also apologize for checking it a little bit later. :) It seems that you are confused as to when do we use the WHILE and DURING. Please take note of this and try to scan your English books about it, okay. Keep practicing, [이름]. :) Have a great day ahead. :)   ~~Teacher Kris   Q1 - We met while the Xmas holidays.>> during Q2 - I learned French during I was working in a wine bar in Paris.>> while Q3 - It happened during was out.>> while Q4 - It happened while my lunch break.>> duringQ5 - It happened while the flooding.>> during Q6 - It happened while the floods.>> duringQ7 - I fell asleep while the film.>> during Q8 - I fell asleep while I was watching the film>> CorrectQ9 - We had a lot of trouble while the journey.>> duringQ10 - While working there, I met some really nice people. >> Correct

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