My homework {7/1}
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My birthday story
I woke up at 6:30 because I was sick at friday.
But I am not sick right back so I was good feeling.
I went swimming and went back at 10:20.
I waited 2 hours and at 12:00,my friendes came.
I played with my friendes for 3 hour.
And I took my friendes to their home.
Then I opened the presentes.
I got Notebook,Sticars,Lego and another.
It was very good birthday!
2019.7.1.
-[이름] rite-
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
My birthday story
I woke up at 6:30 because I was sick at friday.
>> I woke up at 6:30 because I was sick last Friday.
But I am not sick right back so I was good feeling.
>> But I am not sick right now that\'s why I feel good.
I went swimming and went back at 10:20.
>> correct~~
I waited 2 hours and at 12:00,my friendes came.
>> I waited for 2 hours and at 12:00, my friends came over.
I played with my friendes for 3 hour.
>> I played together with my friends for 3 hours.
And I took my friendes to their home.
>> After that, I took my friends to their homes.
Then I opened the presentes.
>> Then, I opened my presents.
I got Notebook,Sticars,Lego and another.
>> I got a notebook, stickers, Lego, and so on.
It was very good birthday!
>> It was a wonderful birthday party!
2019.7.1.
-[이름]
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