My homework {7/10}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I turn on the TV whill I was unhappy.
2. The big storm is comeing to Korea.
3. I likes to seenig the sunset.
4. Anna,take off your watch whill you are swimming.
5. [이름],plase turn down the music.It was to loud!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. I turn on the TV whill I was unhappy.
>> I turn on the TV when I am unhappy.
2. The big storm is comeing to Korea.
>> A big storm is coming to Korea.
3. I likes to seenig the sunset.
>> I like seeing the sunset.
4. Anna,take off your watch whill you are swimming.
>> Anna, take off your watch while you are swimming.
5. [이름],plase turn down the music.It was to loud!!!
>> [이름], please turn down the music. It is too loud!!!
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