My homework {7/3}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. My Dad like to go to a baseball game.
2. I went to Grand Canyon and had a picnic last year.
3. At least,I want to get 1 dollar.
4. I sleep less than 10 hour a day.
5. I had a picnic with host family yesterday.
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. My Dad like to go to a baseball game.
>> My Dad likes to go to a baseball game.
2. I went to Grand Canyon and had a picnic last year.
>> I went to the Grand Canyon and had a picnic last year.
3. At least,I want to get 1 dollar.
>> I want to get 1 dollar at least.
4. I sleep less than 10 hour a day.
>> I sleep less than 10 hours a day.
5. I had a picnic with host family yesterday.
>> I had a picnic with my host family yesterday.
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