My homework {8/1}
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1. Have you ever made ice crem,Jean?
2. I want to drink frozen water.
3. I pulled my dad yesterday.
4. I talked toghther with my grandmother and played toghther.
5. I asked Jean and joined toghther.
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Jean
1. Have you ever made ice crem,Jean?
>> Have you ever made an ice cream, Jean?
2. I want to drink frozen water.
>> CORRECT~~
3. I pulled my dad yesterday.
>> CORRECT~~
4. I talked toghther with my grandmother and played toghther.
>> I talked with my grandmother and played together with her.
5. I asked Jean and joined toghther.
>> I asked Jean to join me.
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