My homework{8/21}
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1. I want to see the largest computer in the world.
2. Morten Ruter king.Jr Is most famous people I know.
3. TV Is oldest thing in my home.It\'s 10 years old.
4. I want to make underwater city.
5. I want to see Eygept pyramids.
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1. I want to see the largest computer in the world.
>> or: I want to see the world\'s largest computer.
2. Morten Ruter king.Jr Is most famous people I know.
>> Martin Luther King, Jr. is the most famous person I know.
3. TV Is oldest thing in my home.It\'s 10 years old.
>> The TV is the oldest thing in my home. It\'s about 10 years old.
4. I want to make underwater city.
>> I want to make an underwater city.
>> or: I want to build an underwater city.
5. I want to see Eygept pyramids.
>> I want to see the pyramids in Egypt.
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