My homework{8/23}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I can see in the ocean.
2. I draw found ruins.
3. Soeeal is old city.
4. My mum looks like grandma.
5. I slept over for a night at gran\'s house.
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. I can see in the ocean.
>> OR: I can see in the ocean, especially when I wear goggles.
>> OR: I can see the ocean.
2. I draw found ruins.
>> I want to draw the ruins found by experts.
3. Soeeal is old city.
>> Seoul is an old city.
4. My mum looks like grandma.
>> My mum looks like my grandma.
5. I slept over for a night at gran\'s house.
>> CORRECT~~
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