my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
hi i\'m comming~ now also i\'m studying my homework^^
1. Please stop shouting. I can hear you fine~
2. I don\'t feel like to cook. Let\'s go out to a restaurant~
3. Would you mind opening the window? It\'s very hot in here~
4. My remote control doesn\'t work. Try to change the batteries~
5. In Los Angeles, smoking is not allowed in any building~
I finish^^ Thant you for this homework~^^
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~
강사 첨삭
Hi Pretty [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework! ^ ^
You did great on this one. Don\'t forget your -ing words ok?
-Teacher Jedah
1. Please stop shouting. I can hear you fine~
>>CORRECT
2. I don\'t feel like to cook. Let\'s go out to a restaurant~
>> I don\'t feel like cooking. Let\'s go out to a restaurant.
3. Would you mind opening the window? It\'s very hot in here~
>>CORRECT
4. My remote control doesn\'t work. Try to change the batteries~
>>My remote control doesn\'t work. Try to changing the batteries.
5. In Los Angeles, smoking is not allowed in any building~
>>CORRECT
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