My homework

2019-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Is there a difference between junk food and fast food? If so, what is it? I think both Junk food and fast food are not healthy food In my opinion, they are different each other a little Junk food has something like sugar, fat that we are not healthy Fast food is good food that include a lot of vegetables, nutritions but we have it quickly . That\\\'s why it is bad food I think we should cotrol them ourselves I\\\'m happy with you too. That\\\'s it for today to be busy ^^ Have a nice weekend^^

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for taking time to finish your homework. You did a good job. I hope you had a restful weekend. See you later in class!(\",)

~Lynn
I think both Junk food and fast food are not healthy food.

>> correct!
 In my opinion, they are different each other a little

>> In my opinion, they are a little different from each other.
 Junk food has something like sugar, fat that we are not healthy

>> Junk food has sugar and fat that are not healthy for us.
 Fast food is good food that include a lot of vegetables, nutritions but we have it quickly .

>> Fast food is good food that includes a lot of vegetables, so it\'s nutritious but we have it quickly .

That\'s why it is bad food.

>> correct!
 I think we should cotrol them ourselves.
>> correct!
I\\\'m happy with you too.

>> I\'m happy learning with you too.
 That\\\'s it for today to be busy ^^

>> That\'s it for today. I\'m busy.
 Have a nice weekend.^^

>> correct!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·