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Thank you for taking time to finish your homework. You did a good job. I hope you had a restful weekend. See you later in class!(\",)
~Lynn
I think both Junk food and fast food are not healthy food.
>> correct!
In my opinion, they are different each other a little
>> In my opinion, they are a little different from each other.
Junk food has something like sugar, fat that we are not healthy
>> Junk food has sugar and fat that are not healthy for us.
Fast food is good food that include a lot of vegetables, nutritions but we have it quickly .
>> Fast food is good food that includes a lot of vegetables, so it\'s nutritious but we have it quickly .
That\'s why it is bad food.
>> correct!
I think we should cotrol them ourselves.
>> correct!
I\\\'m happy with you too.
>> I\'m happy learning with you too.
That\\\'s it for today to be busy ^^
>> That\'s it for today. I\'m busy.
Have a nice weekend.^^
>> correct!
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