My homework & ?

[이름],

I\'m also a teacher so sore throat or having a hoarse voice is a part of the job. Take care of your voice since it\'s our source of livelihood. Have a blessed day! See you tomorrow!(\",)

~Lynn
 I think online education save me a lot of money and time as well as adjust to fit my level.

>>  I think online education saves me a lot of money and time as well as it can be adjusted to fit my level.
 Even though I have short English skill , I feel less shy than the classroom(group)

>> Even though I only know  a little English, I feel less shy than in a classroom.
 So online education programs increase for leaner these day

>> So online education programs increased for leaners these days.
 I had learned to other academies for better teaching but I have no time and should spend much money for English

>> I had studied/attended other academies for better teaching but I have no time and I spent a lot of  money to study English.
 However I\'m happy with meeting online education 

>> However, I\'m happy doing online education.
 I always keep in mind \" Practice makes Perfect !\"
>> correct!
I have a sore throat terribly now 

>> I have a terrible sore throat now.
 I\'m sorry to be down my voice to my teacher Lynn 

>> I\'m sorry that my voice is low today.
 I hope you to know my heart.

>> I hope you\'ll understand me.
 See you!^^ Sleep tight!^^

>> correct!