My homework & ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]!
I miss my high school days the most because it was the most exciting part of my school days. You and your classmates made a lot of pranks when you were young on April Fool\'s Day. That must have been so much fun. Thank you for sharing them to me. See you on Wednesday!(\",)
~Lynn
I slip my mind April Fool\'s day today for a moment
>> It slipped my mind that today is April Fool\'s day.
At first I have a smiling face^^
>> I smiled thinking about it.
When I was student, we went to outside where my teacher doesn\'t know , we changed classroom with next classmates because my teacher is confused to the way to the classroom ^^
>> When I was student, we went outside where my teacher doesn\'t know , we changed classroom with the next class so my teacher was confused on the way to the classroom.
Sometimes we told a lie to teacher on April Fool\'s day or we brought something strange to play like monster dolls which made of ruber it looks like strange animals, creepy insects ^*^
>> One time, we told a lie to our teacher on April Fool\'s Day. Another time, we brought something strange to play like monster dolls which were made of rubber and they look like a strange animals or creepy insects.
At that time we was scolded my teacher^^
>> At that time, we were scolded by our teacher.
It was fun when I went to school ^^
>> This day was fun when I was still a student.
Now, suddenly, I missed my old school friends.^^
>> correct!
My teacher , sometimes have you thought your old school friend?
>> What about you, have you ever thought of your old school friends?
I want to speak English fluently like upper sentences
>> I want to speak English fluently and construct better sentences.
It is hard to come out of my mouth quickly.
>> correct!
I\'m sad to my English skill
>> I\'m sad about my English skill.
I think it\'s different from speaking English. ㅠㅠ
>> correct!
I will have to keep speaking English alone to practice.
>> correct!
Thank you very much my Teacher!^^
>> correct!
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