My homework & ^^

2019-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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What kind of tricks do people play on April Fool\'s day in your country? I slip my mind April Fool\'s day today for a moment At first I have a smiling face^^ When I was student, we went to outside where my teacher doesn\'t know , we changed classroom with next classmates because my teacher is confused to the way to the classroom ^^ Sometimes we told a lie to teacher on April Fool\'s day or we brought something strange to play like monster dolls which made of ruber it looks like strange animals, creepy insects ^*^ At that time we was scolded my teacher^^ It was fun when I went to school ^^ Now suddenly I missed my old school friends^^ My teacher , sometimes have you thought your old school friend? I want to speak English fluently like upper sentences It is hard to come out of my mouth quickly I\'m sad to my English skill I think it\'s different from speaking English ㅠㅠ I will have to keep speaking English alone to practice Thank you very much my Teacher^^

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]!

I miss my high school days the most because it was the most exciting part of my school days. You and your classmates made a lot of pranks when you were young on April Fool\'s Day. That must have been so much fun. Thank you for sharing them to me. See you on Wednesday!(\",)

~Lynn

I slip my mind April Fool\'s day today for a moment

>> It slipped my mind that today is April Fool\'s day.
 At first I have a smiling face^^

>> I smiled thinking about it.
 When I was student, we went to outside where my teacher doesn\'t know , we changed classroom with next classmates because my teacher is confused to the way to the classroom ^^

>> When I was student, we went outside where my teacher doesn\'t know , we changed classroom with the next class so my teacher was confused on the way to the classroom.
 Sometimes we told a lie to teacher on April Fool\'s day or we brought something strange to play like monster dolls which made of ruber it looks like strange animals, creepy insects ^*^

>> One time, we told a lie to our teacher on April Fool\'s Day.  Another time, we brought something strange to play like monster dolls which were made of rubber and they look like a strange animals or creepy insects.
 At that time we was scolded my teacher^^ 

>> At that time, we were scolded by our teacher.
 It was fun when I went to school ^^

>> This day was fun when I was still a student.
 Now, suddenly, I missed my old school friends.^^

>> correct!
 My teacher , sometimes have you thought your old school friend?
>> What about you, have you ever thought of your old school friends?
I want to speak English fluently like upper sentences

>> I want to speak English fluently and construct better sentences.
 It is hard to come out of my mouth quickly.

>> correct!
 I\'m sad to my English skill

>> I\'m sad about my English skill.
 I think it\'s different from speaking English. ㅠㅠ

>> correct!
I will have to keep speaking English alone to practice.

>> correct!
 Thank you very much my Teacher!^^

>> correct!

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