My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s not important to wear fashionable clothes.
It\'s important to wear clothes than you feel better.
Now, i am fun clothes that feel spring.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ashley!
Look at the modifiers below.
Make sure to practice describing words so you can express your thoughts better.
Keep working hard!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think it\'s not important to wear fashionable clothes.>> Correct
It\'s important to wear clothes than you feel better.
It\'s important to wear clothes than you feel better.
>> It\'s important to wear clothes that make you feel better.
Now, i am fun clothes that feel spring.
Now, i am fun clothes that feel spring.
>> Nowadays, I think it\'s fun to wear spring clothes.
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