My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I tooks pictures of cherry blossoms with my family.
It\'s a photo zone with a large frame.
It\'s beautiful because there are so many preety flowers.
We are making hearts with our fingers and smile.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ashley!
Today, let\'s focus on the use of past tense.
You have to use this tense when you\'re telling a story.
The story has already happened.
Make sure that you take note of the correct past form of verbs.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I tooks pictures of cherry blossoms with my family.>> I took pictures of cherry blossoms with my family.
It\'s a photo zone with a large frame.
It\'s a photo zone with a large frame.
>> Correct
It\'s beautiful because there are so many preety flowers.
It\'s beautiful because there are so many preety flowers.
>> It\'s beautiful because there were so many pretty flowers.
We are making hearts with our fingers and smile.
We are making hearts with our fingers and smile.
>> We started making hearts with our fingers and we smiled.
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