My homework^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!(\",)
I\'m sure you make people happy by just knowing or looking at you. Continue having a [이름] and happy disposition cause you make a lot of people smile every day.(\",)
~Lynn
Always smile ^^
>> Someone who always smile.
People I know look me to have happy virus all the time^^
>> I want people around me to know me as someone who has happy virus.
I thank you for looking them
>> Thank you for appreciating it.
But I think my personality I have happy virus is not good side frome time to time
>> But I think a person with a [이름] personality has a bad side too.
Therefore I\'ll keep my nickname as such smile girl in my life ^^
>> However, I\'ll still keep my nickname of a smiling girl.
Because people around me want it.
>> correct!
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