My homework^^

2019-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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My homework : How do you calm yourself when you get angry? I go to singing room - noreabang zz , There are many singing rooms that put the coin in my town especially I can sing alone I go it from time to time not only happy but also angry I go swimming in the gym has pool around my house sometimes I have time to talk with my friend I think everything depends on my mind

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!(\",)

Everything you said are perfect for cooling yourself down when you\'re angry. I sometimes want to go up on top of a mountain and shout at the top of my lungs when I\'m really angry but I can\'t do that so I sing to the top of my lungs instead. I specially like rock songs.(\",)

~Lynn

I go to singing room - noreabang zz ,

>> I go to the singing room/karaoke.
 There are many singing rooms that put the coin in my town especially I can sing alone 

>> There are many coin-operated karaoke machines in my town where I could sing alone.
 I go it from time to time not only happy but also angry 

>> I do feel angry from time to time.
 I go swimming in the gym has pool around my house

>> My other option is to go swimming in the gym pool near my house.
 sometimes I have time to talk with my friend

>> Sometimes, I talk to my friend.
 I think everything depends on my mind

>> I think it depends on what I think at that time.

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