My homework^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!(\",)
Everything you said are perfect for cooling yourself down when you\'re angry. I sometimes want to go up on top of a mountain and shout at the top of my lungs when I\'m really angry but I can\'t do that so I sing to the top of my lungs instead. I specially like rock songs.(\",)
~Lynn
I go to singing room - noreabang zz ,
>> I go to the singing room/karaoke.
There are many singing rooms that put the coin in my town especially I can sing alone
>> There are many coin-operated karaoke machines in my town where I could sing alone.
I go it from time to time not only happy but also angry
>> I do feel angry from time to time.
I go swimming in the gym has pool around my house
>> My other option is to go swimming in the gym pool near my house.
sometimes I have time to talk with my friend
>> Sometimes, I talk to my friend.
I think everything depends on my mind
>> I think it depends on what I think at that time.
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