My homework
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[이름],
That\'s right [이름]. We have things we want to do but we can\'t because we need to set priorities. It\'s sad some times.
~Lynn
While we live our life, we have to do somethig a lot although I don\'t like to do.
>> While we live our life, we have to do a lot of things although we don\'t like to do it.
For example, I want to travel now but I have to go to the work and I have to do the chore for my family
>> For example, I want to travel now but I have to go to work and I have to do house chores for my family.
I wanted to take a nap when I was tired but I couldn\'t take a rest because of working ^^
>> I want to take a nap when I\'m tired but I couldn\'t take a rest because I have to work.
I think not only I but also all are same situation^^
>> I think it\'s not only me but all of us have the same situation.
In my opinion, all of us need to give way someone who we love ^^
>> In my opinion, all of us need to give way to someone we love.
OR>> In my opinion, all of us need to sacrifice for the people we love.
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