My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the first thing you notice about a person?
When I had hard time my family had a problem, someone not oly helped but also kept for me
I have never forgotten them who helped me
I always think to thank
I want to live like lives which someone want not to forget me
강사 첨삭
[이름],
It\'s human nature to want someone to remember you. People need people. Humans need someone to care for them. See you in class later.(\',)
~Lynn
When I had hard time my family had a problem, someone not oly helped but also kept for me.
>> Whenever I had a hard time or my family had a problem, someone was always there to help me.
I have never forgotten them who helped me.
>> I will never forget those who helped me.
I always think to thank
>> I always think of thanking them.
I want to live like lives which someone want not to forget me.
>> I want to live an unforgettable life with someone who will never forget me.
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