my homework~^^

2019-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

학생이 쓴 원문

oh you were lucky today.i also was lucky because i was almost late for class.but i manage to come home .i hope the rest of the day is full of luck. Where do our personalities come from? Are they genetically or environmentally acquired? Explain. well, i think our personalities seem to have a lot of genetic influences. My daughters and my husband look so much like parents\' personality. I also sometimes feel that I resemble my parents\' personality. but it is important to make personality environmentally. thank you for reading my works.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sarah!  Thank you for answering your homework. Way to go!

~ T. Irene ~

Oh, you were lucky today.

>>> Correct.  

 I also was lucky because i was almost late for class but i manage to come home ..

>>> I was also lucky because I was almost late for my class but I managed to get home fast.     

I hope the rest of the day is full of luck.
>>> Correct.  
Where do our personalities come from? Are they genetically or environmentally acquired? Explain.
 Well, I think our personalities seem to have a lot of genetic influences.

>>> Correct.   

My daughters and my husband look so much like parents\' personality.

>>> My daughters and my husband have the same personalities.  

I also sometimes feel that I resemble my parents\' personality.

>>> Correct.   

but it is important to make personality environmentally.
>>>  Although it is also important to note the influence of the environment to our personality.  
Thank you for reading my works.

>>> Correct.  

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