my homework~^^
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강사 첨삭
Hello there Sarah! Thank you for answering your homework. Way to go!
~ T. Irene ~
Oh, you were lucky today.
>>> Correct.
I also was lucky because i was almost late for class but i manage to come home ..
>>> I was also lucky because I was almost late for my class but I managed to get home fast.
I hope the rest of the day is full of luck.
>>> Correct.
Where do our personalities come from? Are they genetically or environmentally acquired? Explain.
Well, I think our personalities seem to have a lot of genetic influences.
>>> Correct.
My daughters and my husband look so much like parents\' personality.
>>> My daughters and my husband have the same personalities.
I also sometimes feel that I resemble my parents\' personality.
>>> Correct.
but it is important to make personality environmentally.
>>> Although it is also important to note the influence of the environment to our personality.
Thank you for reading my works.
>>> Correct.
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