my homework~^^

Hello Sarah! Thanks for writing! ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

Good evening teacher Irene.

>>>    

 i\'m very appreciated to you for taking our class in a bright and serious .

>>>  I really appreciate you for being bright but serious in our class.  
 Someday, my English will improve and I want to talk much more freely.

>>> I know that someday, my English will improve and I will be able to talk more freely.    
Although I need a translator now,
>>> For now though, I still need a translator.      
ESSAY: How should we (or the government) overcome poverty? Do you believe someone can still attain a \"rags to riches\" status?
Our country was under Japanese colonial rule.

>>> Correct. 

>>>  Our country was under Japanese colonial rule in the past.    

As soon as Korea was liberated from Japan, there was nothing because of the Korean War.

>>> As soon as Korea was liberated from Japan, it was then further devastated by the Korean War.    

that history is just only 60 years ago.

>>>  Those events happened  just 60 years ago.   

But we have changed so much now.

>>> Correct.     

i heard my parents could eat just once per a day..

>>> I heard that at that time, my parents could only have one meal a day.     

they had worked hard. and I overcame the pain.so we can live comfortable .

>>> They had to work really hard to overcome the pain and live comfortably.

As I grew older, I became aware of many absurd things.

>>>  Correct.   

Money begets money.

>>>  Correct.   

tyranny of the establishment .but We have to get through all this.

>>>  There is tyranny in every establishment but I believe that we can get over all these things.    
Thank you for reading my works.^^

>>>  Correct.