my homework~^^
학생이 쓴 원문
hi~!! teacher irene
i will keep in mind Let\'s not let time just pass by without acquiring good memories. We cannot turn back time so let\'s just enjoy the time we have in our hands. have a nice weekend.
ESSAY: Is gift giving common among all human cultures? Is the value of the gift or present important? Why? Explain the meaning of the saying \'It\'s the thought that counts.\'
Gift is giving common among all human cultures like birthday,holiday, and some special day.
Giving and receiving presents makes you feel better.
but sometime i have got a lot of pressure of gift cost. and i\'ve got a stress.
\'It\'s the thought that counts.\'is very good meaning.
It is good to give a gift as an expression of gratitude, but the way you express it with all your heart is more important.
thank you for reading my works.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sarah! Happy weekend!
~T. Irene ~
hi~!! teacher irene
>>> Correct.
i will keep in mind Let\'s not let time just pass by without acquiring good memories.
i will keep in mind Let\'s not let time just pass by without acquiring good memories.
>>> I always keep in mind, “Let\'s not let time just pass by without acquiring good memories.”
We cannot turn back time so let\'s just enjoy the time we have in our hands.
>>> Correct.
have a nice weekend.
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: Is gift giving common among all human cultures? Is the value of the gift or present important? Why? Explain the meaning of the saying \'It\'s the thought that counts.\'
Gift is giving common among all human cultures like birthday,holiday, and some special day.
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: Is gift giving common among all human cultures? Is the value of the gift or present important? Why? Explain the meaning of the saying \'It\'s the thought that counts.\'
Gift is giving common among all human cultures like birthday,holiday, and some special day.
>>> Gift giving is common among all human cultures in different occasions like birthdays, holidays and specia days.
Giving and receiving presents makes you feel better.
Giving and receiving presents makes you feel better.
>>> Correct.
but sometime i have got a lot of pressure of gift cost. and i\'ve got a stress.
but sometime i have got a lot of pressure of gift cost. and i\'ve got a stress.
>>> But sometimes I am stressed out from the cost of the gift.
\'It\'s the thought that counts.\'is very good meaning.
\'It\'s the thought that counts.\'is very good meaning.
>>> ‘It\'s the thought that counts.\' has a very good meaning.
It is good to give a gift as an expression of gratitude but the way you express it with all your heart is more important.
thank you for reading my works.
It is good to give a gift as an expression of gratitude but the way you express it with all your heart is more important.
thank you for reading my works.
>>> Correct.
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