my homework~^^

2019-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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good evening~!! irene teacher.. I\'ve been waiting for my childrens since 5 30 pm at the ballet academy. I\'m a little tired but i used to it now. i hope you have a comfortable evening.^^ breakneck speed I woke up late. I have to get to the school in ten minutes. so I tried to get there at a breakneck speed.and I made it. thank you for reading my works.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sarah! It was nice hearing from you today.
~ T. Irene ~
good evening~!! irene teacher..
>>> Good evening teacher Irene!
 I\'ve been waiting for my childrens since 5 30 pm at the ballet academy.
>>>  I\'ve been waiting for my children since 5:30 pm at the ballet academy.
 I\'m a little tired but i used to it now.
>>>  I\'m a little tired but I\'m used to it now.
I hope you have a comfortable evening.^^
>>> Correct.
 breakneck speed
 I woke up late.
>>> Correct.
I have to get to the school in ten minutes.
>>> Correct.
So I tried to get there at a breakneck speed.
>>> Correct.
and I made it.
>>> I made it on time.
Thank you for reading my works.
>>>  Correct.

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