My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Picking apples is hard.
2. I like flying kites.
3. Going to the beach is for swwiming.
4. I want to built a sandcastle on my naxt vacation.
5. I went backpacking last fall vacation.
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. Picking apples is hard.
>> CORRECT~~
2. I like flying kites.
>> CORRECT~~
>> OR: I enjoy flying kites.
3. Going to the beach is for swwiming.
>> Going to the beach is for swimming.
4. I want to built a sandcastle on my naxt vacation.
>> I want to build a sandcastle on my next vacation.
5. I went backpacking last fall vacation.
>> CORRECT~~
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